sayrenee ([info]sayrenee) wrote,
@ 2008-02-26 15:34:00
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Current mood:creative
Current music:the shins - red rabbit

I want to rub between your thighs, blow kisses right between your eyes.

I just got incredibly inspired and wrote the very beginning of a possible short story for me to work on. I'd love any feedback on what very little I have so far :)


"And the clock struck one."

Alice ran her fingertips down the length of her own arm, stopping to tap the face of her watch that encircled her wrist. It had been a gift from a friend and was made of seashells and hemp. She typically hated watches, but there was something about the intricate way this one was woven that she really liked.

One o'clock.

This time meant nothing in particular to her, except that she typically was taking a nap by one on a Tuesday afternoon. Instead, she lay splayed out- belly down on top of her black down comforter, hands tucked under her chin in a haphazard pose. She glanced down at the fluffy blanket, picking off tiny pieces of lint as she spotted them- only to have them float back to exactly where she'd plucked them from. Gray probably would've been a better choice, or tan. It was raining out and she had just returned from lunch with a friend. The bottoms of her jeans were still a bit damp and Alice could feel the wet cold on her heels. She'd been so sure of the last one. If only she could be more "like a guy," fuck 'em and leave 'em before they wake up the next morning. Not that she was bitter, but rather practical... Alice didn't have time to waste on getting hung up on some dude, especially one that didn't deserve it. She couldn't decide if her current relationship status was by choice or mere circumstance. After all, she did find him a bit awkward upon his return from Italy. Not in that cute boy-ish manner she'd seen at first, but just really like strange and uncomfortable. A bit less attractive too. But it was the idea of having someone in her bed on a regular basis that she couldn't quite let go of. The kissing and the hands-between-thighs and the heavy breathing on each others' necks. Sure, it never really happened that way, but oh god- she had been so fucking close.

...And that's all I have for now.


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[info]ukuleleblues
2008-03-12 11:04 pm UTC (link)
hey its rae! i friended youuu.

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